One day 4 kids named Jack , Finn , Priscilla , and Ava were just watching the king and queens baby Ja'mahl while King Mike and Queen Tara visited Mikal and Maralice in Grown up land. So then all of the sudden prince Ja'mahl went to sleep and we put Ja'mahl in his crib to sleep and then I told Jack , Finn , Priscilla to go play quietly. I sat with the baby monitor next to me watching my tv and reading my Facebook. All of the sudden I felt a shake and I saw brown clouds and I said "that can't be good"!
"Ava Ava this is an emergency I'm going to call Mike and Tara grab Ja'mahl and hide. So then king Mike and Queen Tara went on their chocolate boat since their was melted chocolate and I hid in our emergency basement that had all the supplies we needed food , drinks , toys , TV and baby crib. So we put Ja'mahl in the emergency crib and he somehow slept through all this.So then King Mike and queen Tara thanked us for begiing safe and sound. So then we looked through our emergency telescope and noticed were not going to get out all the sudden it was raining skittles , and M&M , and Hershey Kisses , but then all of the sudden two gianactic gummy bears destroyed Kid land FORVER! When we woke up the next day Kid land was destroyed. King Mike and Queen Tara said that he was happy that all of us were safe. Priscilla , Jack , Finn , and me were trying to figure out how to safe Kid land. We wanted to call the people in grown up land to help us. So the King Kristoo , and Queen Melissa said they were sad grownup land was destoryed. The people in Grownup land wanted to help so they called construction workers and decided to make a whole new kid land a better one. So I talked to the construction workers and they said that the reason why Kid land was destroyed was your enemy chocolate land was jealous of us so they decided to destroy our land so their the number one land in candy town. So the construction workers said we're going to put a pool and a outside playground with a slide and a swing and a imaginary area for kids between the ages of 3-9. So a month later kid land became Ava's awesome kid land! Ava's awesome kid land feature a pool imaginary kid play house play ground and so much more. Ava's awesome land became number one the original mayor's of candy town were Jim and Jasmine Pantaleno they were retired so Alicia and Matt became the mayors of candy town. Ava's awesome kid land was so much better and so many boys and girls between ages 3-9 lived their and everything was going smoothly the whole candy town was happy 2015 was going to be candy town's year.
From Awesome Ava
Hi bloggers Ava here hope you like the story if you have more awesome story idea tell me I want more ideas just like this story more more and so much more. Have a nice day
From Awesome Ava again
Ava's Kid Land sounds like fun. I think a good story to write would be about the family's upcoming vacation in the Poconos this July and some of the things we might do together.
ReplyDeleteI love the ideas you have and the candy theme! I love the chocolate boat and the giant gummy bears! This would make a great children's book with illustrations! Draw pictures and I'll help,you make book!
ReplyDeleteCool adventure. I like the sound of King Mike. Everyone should call me that. This was a very imaginative story. A +!
ReplyDeleteAs mayor of Candy Town, I proclaim this story to be bodacious
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