March 16, 2014

the color night land

One day prisclla ever sense she learned how to tallk and learn about shapes she told her mom to call her cousin Ava and she said to tell her i want a story about color and night land. so thats what i did after school i told my teacher and both of my teacher thought it was a good idea and they decdied for me to give them both a copy of it and if i get like something higher then a B i can make it a preschool childerens book and be in school but do writting so thats what i did i started my story here it goes.

once upon a time their were all of these shapes in gray land and they didnt have any color so their magic fairy made a forumla and made something that will make something in colors and it actually worked she hit every shape in the leg and then she turned them into color shapes they woke up after that and noticed they were all colors and they had a color party

read to the class and my teacher
grade from teacher A Plus

THE END
Love Ava

4 comments:

  1. Wait did you really read it to the class or was that part of the story?

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  2. part of the story mike love ava

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  3. Good stuff! Your blog is my favorite thing to read.

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  4. Keep writing, you are getting good at story telling.

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