chapter one
pg one. one day me , mom , dad we were all sitting at the table when all of the sudden dad shouts. pg 2 hey ava you want to do something. pg three yeah dad what well theres a consent yeah i said. pg 4 but dad said it involes traveling whats wrong with that well youll get tired of it and its summer vacation yeah but ill get rich and famous and more rich ok but your spilting it with me.pg five so when we went back to school i talked to my teacher and she said that i love mysterys so she agreed witn me and i brought mr dudko and brandon with me because were going to need some men with us.
chapater two
pg six ok team we have everything right yep ok lets go to the helicopter. pg 7 whats our first place we have to go to. well debby we have to go to japan because thats where the first mystery is. pg 8 so we got to japan and we found a newspaper and a rock and it said you will find your mystery in a sweet and sour chicken. pg 9 WHAT wait look to your left a restaunt and look a table with our name on it with a sweet and sour chicken on a plate with a paper sticking out of it that says clue two. pg 10 heres are next clue what does it say ok great you find your second clue now for your final clue you have to beat angry bird the game but in real life and if you do that your prize will be there just wating for you heres your map. pg 11 lets go ahhhh. pg 12 ok so we are now having a constest between angry birds i think we can win because we have super powers i have fire power brandon has muscle power me dudko has bad candy power and misses olbrias has frozen power so i started out doing my fire power so everything was burned and then mr dudko made the pigs die using his bad jolly ranchers and then everything was destroyed but the wood so brandon used his muscle power to break everything and then we got the tresure chest open there were 1,000 jolly ranchers and a lot of gold pg 13 so heres what we did we went to good old toms and they said we have $100,000,000,00💵 so they said that i could have the money and then if i wanted to i could give them some because the guys wanted the jolly ranhers so i saved all the money 💵 and got some jolly ranchers pg 14 so the next day after i got back from japan i was reading the paper and it said that ava beeler alltime riches person ever then when i got home i was so famous i was like a pampered queen.
chapater three
pg 15 and one more thing before i got to go. life is good for some people pg 16 but still life is good 😎
the end
ok guys thats the end of the mystery so the end and bye
From Love ❤😃
Ava
How exciting, the pages went by so fast.
ReplyDeleteThat was great! Bad candy power sounds interesting. If you like mysteries you should read a Nancy Drew book like your mom used to. Grandma still has them all.
ReplyDeleteAh see Uncle Mike remembers the Nancy Drew books too! You did a fabulous job on your first mystery. I like how you had to find the clues!
ReplyDeleteWhat a terrific job Ava!!!! You are so creative and your imagination is wonderful!! I just know that one day you'll be on the New York's Best Seller list, and I can say, I know her!!" Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work! - Mrs. Olbrias
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